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... it seems to me cruel that white men, whose governments are armed with the most murderous weapons known to science, should amaze and confound their fellow creatures with a doctrine of salvation imperfectly understood by themselves and a code of ethics foreign to the climate and instincts of those races whose most cherished customs they outrage and whose gods they insult.The conversion of the raw recruit is covered in just three stanzas and describes how he initially finds discipline and routine incomprehensible and when his failings have an adverse effect on the communal life of the barrack-room, his comrades show him the error of his ways.
[The Letters of Rudyard Kipling, Ed. Pinney , vol 2]
abby-nay ('not now'), kul ('tomorrow'), and hazar-ho ('wait a bit')All are terms indicating a tendency to put things off. Thinking back to my own service as a 19-year old in Egypt in 1953-54, I am both amused and perturbed to remember that the first corrupted words of Arabic that I heard used by the two-year National Servicemen of my troop were, with what they thought they meant:
maleesh ('it doesn't matter'), barden, ('tomorrow'), and a term I forget which in translation was 'When the apricots are ripe' which means wait more than a bit.There was also Ally kefik or something like it which was said to mean 'As Allah wills' which at least gave things a remote chance of them happening that day. Strange to think that nothing had changed over 60 years—but then both armies had relatively little active soldiering to do. I suspect that the first words learnt by the soldier in Afghanistan today are very different.
... for all our later criticism, this sticks in the mind, sticks there now as quintessential wisdom.But then Wells added that, in the light of the lack of preparedness for the South African War, Kipling had deluded himself at the time of writing, since England, too, had 'kept her side-arms awful'.
...his whole life, from the angry moods and the freaks of the young soldier in the making who kicks over the traces, to the fine, healthy adaption of the true professional: from his first, tense anguish when, with set teeth, he faces the enemy fire:In Chevrillon's view: “These ballads were really addressed to soldiers”.
An' now the hugly bullets come peckin' through the dust,to the experienced and the finished type of the sergeant-shepherd, who holds his men in hand under fire, and finally sweeps them forward to the attack:
An' no one wants to face 'em, but every beggar must ...
E's just as sick as they are, 'is 'eart is like to split,
But 'e works 'em, works 'em, works 'em till he feels 'em take the bit;
The rest is 'oldin' steady till the watchful bugles play,
An' 'e lifts 'em, lifts 'em, lifts 'em through the charge that wins the day!”
Kipling had never been in battle but his vision of war is realistic. He knows that bullets hurt, that under fire everyone is terrified, that the ordinary soldier never knows what the war is about ...As proof, Orwell goes on to invite the reader to compare:
An' now the hugly bullets come peckin' through the dustWith:
An' no one wants to face 'em, but every beggar must;
So, like a man in irons, which isn't glad to go,
They moves 'em off by companies uncommon stiff an' slow.
Forward the Light Brigade!In his 1955 biography of Kipling, Charles Carrington again used the same stanza from 'The 'eathen' to make the same point but with more emphasis:
Was there a man dismayed?
No! though the soldier knew
Someone had blundered.
[Kipling] never pretended to invent; it was his pride to record the traditional army legends … Where he differed from other writers of battle pieces was in his extraordinary talent for getting under the skin of his characters and seeing what their eyes must have seen:In 1994 Peter Keating (Kipling, The Poet, Secker & Warburg, London, 1994) wrote of the 'Barrack Room Ballads' section of The Seven Seas that:
An' now the hugly bullets come peckin' through the dust,
An' no one wants to face 'em, but every beggar must;
So, like a man in irons, which isn't glad to go,
They moves 'em off by companies uncommon stiff an' slow.
Let that be compared with any other account that has been written of soldiers going into battle! How did he know that they looked like that?”
... the new barrack room ballads were largely continuations of the old, and some of them rank with the very best of Kipling's soldier poems.Keating includes "The 'eathen" in his subsequent list. Jan Montefiore notes Kipling's praise of the NCO in "The 'eathen" ('The backbone of the Army is the Non-Commissioned Man” but then writes that:
Kipling's heroes are more often those who give orders than those who obey them.a rule to which, while it may be true for many of Kipling's stories and poems, the Barrack Room Ballads are the exception.
...Poems such as 'The 'eathen' and 'Back to the Army Again' revealing once again [his] close understanding of military life and an uncanny empathy with Tommy Atkins.
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