In the Presence (Notes edited by John McGivering. We are grateful to Alastair Wilson for various suggestions and comments)

notes on the text

'British Officers were relieved after every hour and so were we ... Daily from Reveille to Retreat, the public were allowed to come there and pay their respects to their late King.... Continuously for four days we were on duty. Did not change our uniform even.'

The story juxtaposes two kinds of honour—one concerning a blood-feud, the other the endurance of physical and psychological strain—and in both cases the honour belongs to Indian subjects of the Empire. But the scope of the story widens as it goes on: for whereas the Subadar-Major and the Chaplain admire the heroic propriety with which men of their own race and regiment have conducted themselves, the Havildar-Major, who has crossed the 'Black Water' and seen sights beyond the knowledge of his seniors, requires them to admire the behaviour of men who are not Sikhs, but 'idolaters' of a different race. The action which he reports is one not of martial valour, but of supreme self-discipline in the observance of a ritual, and it takes place on an international stage, a performance witnessed by hundreds of thousands of people of every race and creed.

In the evocation of the bowed figures forced to witness the endless, maddening procession of feet around the coffin of the dead King, Kipling creates one of the most haunting images of psychological stress in literature. Documentary realism and the narrator's even, sober tone unfold a Gothic and urban horror, a nightmare of alienating, multitudinous repetition.

The values of courage, caste loyalty, and ruthless determination, exemplified by Rutton Singh and Attar Singh, are also present in the behaviour of the four Gurkhas, who share the Sikhs' unbending meticulousness (the Sikhs' scrupulous accounting for the 'borrowed' cartridges, the Gurkhas' refusal to loosen their high, painfully stiff collars, even though they have to bend their heads twice as low in order to give the same impression of grief as the British grenadiers).

But though the Chaplain equates the two 'affairs', the story suggests that the Gurkhas' faith measures, and goes beyond, that of the Sikhs. The context of their heroic loyalty is sharpened by the glancing implication that the 'integrity of certain regiments' in the Imdian Army is suspect, a matter about which the Havildar-Major evidently knows more than he reveals.

The poem which follows the story, “Jobson’s Amen”, is one of Kipling's last and clearest expressions of distaste for imperialism as as an extension of Little Englandism.

"The Debt" (Limits and Renewals, 1932), in which two Muslims in India discuss the dangerous illness of Edward VII's successor, George V, makes an interesting post-war pendant to this story.

...where the theme is the Sikh code of honour illustrated by a story of revenge, the frame is almost as long as the story it leads up to (which deals with another aspect of the Sikh concept of honour), so that frame and story really constitute two separate tales loosely joined together.

The priest of a Sikh regiment tells how two of his men accomplished, at the cost of their lives, a ritual revenge: and the young corporal, returned from England, tells how the four Gurkha aides-de-camp kept their exhausting watch, with unremitted rigour of observance, at the lying-in-state of Edward VII. The underlying conception is honour, and the accepted rituals through which it is preserved.