This poem was first published the Civil and Military Gazette on 16 April 1886 . See ORG Volume 8, page 5112. See also David Alan Richards, who records it as ‘unsigned.’ (p. 521).
It is collected in:
Departmental Ditties and Other Verses (1885)
Early Verse (1900)
Inclusive Verse (1919)
Definitive Verse (1940)
Sussex Edition Volume 32, p. 108
Burwash Edition, Volume 25
The Works of Rudyard Kipling, Wordsworth Poetry Library
Theme and Background
Kipling took an active part in the lively social life of Simla, which not only provided him with ample “copy” of which he took full advantage, but also produced a ready supply of girls with whom he could fall in love. See our Notes on “The Lovers’ Litany.”
When, much to the regret of his friends and of Kipling himself, a ballroom in Simla was taken over as government offices, he curses those who work there, promising that they will always be distracted by echoes and memories of dance and romance.
swept and garnished See Kipling's implacable story of the same name in A Diversity of Creatures, about German atrocities in Belgium in 1914. Also Luke 11,25: 'And when he cometh, he findeth it swept and garnished'.
Benmore public assembley-rooms in Simla.
docket a word of many meanings – here probably a file of papers, or some official documents.
duftar defined in a footnote as 'office'.
Babus In this context English-speaking Bengali clerks, but used more widely as a term of respect for an educated Bengali. See Hobson-Jobson (p. 44) under 'Baboo'. Also Roberta Baldi's notes on Kipling’s poem "What Happened”. Also Kim, Chapter XII, for Hurree Chunder Mookerjee, who plays an important part in the story. There is another Babu in "The Ballad of Boh Da Thone".
teak a tropical hardwood that makes excellent dance-floors.
Strawberry Hill a house in Chota (Little) Simla, named after Horace Walpole's gothic house
in Twickenham in south-west London.
deodarsCedrus deodara, a species of cedar native to the western Himalayas. A familiar tree to Anglo-Indians in Simla.
Kipling gives a group of tales within Wee Willie Winkie about the loves of men and women, and their consequences, the subtitle Under the Deodars.
wan (pronounced to rhyme with 'on') colourless, pale, sickly.
Nay a word of several meanings but here an archaic form of 'no'.
foredone doomed or condemned beforehand.
meet in this context appropriate or suitable.
galop a lively dance in ¾ time
verandahs open pillared galleries round a house or bungalow providing shade and whatever breeze there may be. An essential feature of tropical countries, they appear in much of the Indian prose and verse. See Hobson-Jobson (p. 964).